Death — a five-letter word that is the cause of change for many. It is difficult and sometimes a rude shock, changing lives forever. In certain cases, it marks the end of long held traditions.
βWhat will poor Alicia think when she gets to know about her grandfather, who is suffering from cancer?β Aliciaβs mother thought out loud. Even worse, what if she gets to know that it is a hopeless case? Cigarettes, cigarettes, cigarettesΒ — was there anything greater to him than his cigarettes? Weβd all requested him to give it a try and quit smoking. But what was the result? He stopped for a week, and then he resumed again!β Mother sobbed as father wiped his eyes with his handkerchief.
Although her parentsβ bedroom door was closed, Alicia overheard what was said. She sat down with a thud on the ground. Oh Lord, her dear grandpa. Yes, grandpa was having a face-to-face conversation with death. It was terrible. She ran upstairs with tears rolling down her cheeks.
She was a little five-year-old girl and was very soft. Alicia was a βgirly-girlβ without any airs about her. She had blonde hair which she combed neatly. And she would then plait them like an expert. She was blessed with an angel-like and loved-by-all personality.
Aliciaβs 70-year-old Grandpa, meanwhile, was addicted to smoking. As a result of this vice, he was now terminally ill with cancer.
The wider effect of vices
Grandma had passed on five years ago. Coincidentally, she too was cancer stricken. She was devoted to Grandpa, always giving him company. In fact, Grandma adored him. Grandpa too was very fond ofΒ Β her and loved to talk about the day they met in a park — when their dancing eyes had met. Well of course, their friendship had converted into a lifelong union.
Grandmaβs cause of cancer was, of course, Grandpa. This was because she was a regular second-hand smoker. After her demise, Grandpa lost his interest in living and further increased his smoking frequency. This led to a quick decline in his health. He often cursed and blamed himself as the cause of his beloved wifeβs death.
Alicia walked over to his room and knocked on the door. She whispered, βGrandpa, may I come in?β
βA-ha! Sweety! Come in, come in!β came Grandpaβs familiar voice from inside.
Alicia bent her head to fight her tears back as she entered his room.
In his youth, Grandpa was a well-built, upright man. His form seemed to bring a skyscraper to mind. But he was now lean and frail — resembling a lanky frame and looked almost skeleton-like. Grandpa was seated on a chair. He was reading a book and he smiled as Alicia walked in.
Uncomfortable truths
In his hand, Granpda held a copy of βBest Ways to Stay Happy in a Hopeless Caseβ — a book written by John Henry Carter. The author was well-known and heβd written this as his final one at the age of 99. Alicia snatched the book away and said, βPromise me, youβre not going to read this stupid book again. If you do, it goes to the fireplace, okay?β Alicia said amid sobs.
βWhy are you crying?β Grandpa asked helplessly and reached out to hug her.
βWhat does it mean by a hopeless case?β Alicia cried.
βIt means I am surely invited by God. If I remain unfaithful to him, he will send me back. And if I remain faithful, he will keep me back.β
βGrandpa! I am growing up now. I understand what death is. You canβt fool me!β Alicia replied.
βOkay, okay, dear. Now, let me sleep, will you? I need lots of rest. When you come to see me next, bring me something; anything you like. Iβd like to spend time looking at it, and maybe, I will simply think about memories of the times Iβve spent with you.β
At this, Alicia eased up a little bit. Kissing her Grandpa on his bald head, she hopped back to her room. She knew exactly what to bring the next day.
The following morning, she made sure to remember to take something for Grandpa. Alicia went over to his room, knocked on the door and went inside.
βAnd what is it in your hand?β Grandpa asked, rubbing his shrunk hands in excitement.
Alicia had taken with her a tally counter that Grandpa had once gifted her. It wasnβt an ordinary one though. It was given to Grandpa by his Grandpa, and so went the cycle. She went across to where he was seated and as she handed it to him, Alicia said, βIt is damaged, Grandpa. Each time I press it till 99, it works just fine. But when I press it one more time to convert the numbers to 100, it stops! It infuriates me.β
βWhat? Let me try. I bet I will surely convert the numbers to read 100 now.β Saying so,Β Grandpa took the tally counter and kissed it gently. Then, he pressed it one time.
The first zero turned and now read one. The numbers kept turning steadily with each click — two, three, four, five and so forth.
And it turned
Alicia was sitting still, very still, at the edge of the bed. With bated breath, she watched her Grandpaβs thumb pressing the switch gently as the numbers flipped from one to another.
Her eyes were open so wide that an onlooker would have been able to see the enormity of her gaze. Grandpaβs hazel green eyes were stuck on his wrinkled thumb. They were brimming with tears β of both grief and happiness.
His movement grew slower. However, although his eyes were drooping, a quiet and helpless smile came over his face. Soon, he started losing his grip over the counter.
Alarmed, Alicia cried, βGrandpa, are you okay? Y-You are a-acting strange. Is anything wrong?β
Grandpa nodded lightly and continued pressing the tally counter. By this time, Grandpa had clicked up to 98 and was just pressing the counter again. It read 99 when Alicia caught sight of it.
Alicia held her breath and stared at the wrinkled thumb intently. It forced itself to flip. The numbers turned from 99 to 100. And βclickβ went the tally counter to read 1-0-0.
βGrandpa! You did it! It is 100! How did you do it? Tell me, Grandpa, how did you do it?β Alicia quizzed in excitement.
The tally counter fell from Grandpaβs hand and shattered into pieces.
βGrandpa?β
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Well written
Excellent writing Alankritaππβ€οΈβ€οΈYou express the emotions of the story so nicely nd there is a message against smoking which is the cause of cancer, so in your story you draw both the social message against cancer nd the emotional love-bond between a grand pa nd grand daughter very beautyfully.keep it up πβ€οΈ
Very good mom
Very nicely written by a little girl like you. A good and sensible massage for all brings. Go ahead…
Darun hoyeche
What an incredible heart touching story, well narrated, showing values of family bonding of different generations while addressing a common yet deadly addiction
causeing damage to loved ones. It drew a picture of the story in my mind while reading it. Well done.. I look forward to your next story.
Alonkrita feeling proud to have a student like you. I wish you to lit up your desire more in coming days. I believe it will bear many fruits that will satiate the thirst of many readers.
Proud of you
This piece of writing is really brilliant.. Keep it up dear.. Will reach great heights in future..
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Deserves applauding. I wish your dreams will fulfill soon.God bless
What a beautifully written story Mom! Iβm looking forward to reading more.. keep up the good work.
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Very touching. Keep it up.
A nice touching story…with a message too.ππππ