Memsaab! The voice seemed to drift in from far away; yet a low constant rap on the door woke me up from my deep slumber, that late summer afternoon. It was that time of the midday when the sun was overhead and the heat oppressive. Most four-legged creatures too sought relief from the harsh sun and lay motionless in the dry undergrowth of trees and bushes. Except for my German shepherd Diva, who, as was her habit, lay sprawled out under the bed in the childrenβs room; after all the boys were back from boarding school!
One-master dog
German shepherds are one-master dogs and so was Diva. The love of her life was my husband, with my elder son Armaan, coming a close second. Her equation with Ashray, my younger son, was however a different story all together. He was her rival, always managing to smuggle into his dadβs arms before she could do so and the only reason she tolerated him was because he would keep feeding her tidbits the entire day.
Memsaab! This time there was a sense of urgency and panic in the voice and it was loud enough to invade my peaceful slumber. Drowsy and disoriented, I opened the door and found my terror-stricken bearer, Assamiya, urging me towards the childrenβs room.
A frightening sight awaited me
I quickly followed him and froze at the sight that awaited me; Ashray stood there, still as a statue, blood gushing out of a big wound on his left cheek, tears threatening to spill over. Diva sneaked out from between my legs and ran away while Armaan, voice choked, explained that Ashray had slid under the bed and had probably tugged at Divaβs tail which had made her turn around and snap at him. Ashray must have been too close and was bitten.
The bawarchi had by then informed my husband who rushed home from office, his face red with fury. He took one look at Ashray, picked up a cricket bat lying nearby and stormed off to find Diva who had found a hiding place under one of the kitchen cabinets.
Panic ensued!
The scenario was something like this.
Armaan had taken Ashray to the washroom and was splashing water on his wound (which I learnt later on, was the recommended first aid procedure to be followed for dog bites). Alongside he was issuing quick instructions to Assamiya to tell the driver to get the car out.
I was taking turns running from washroom to bedroom, bedroom to washroom, mumbling incoherently, βHow will the doctor fill up that hole? Had Diva eaten up that chunk of flesh?? It was his face; what on earth will happen now? He was just 12 and yet to meet his first girlfriend! Who will even look at him?!! We needed to rush to the hospital and I may have to spend the night there; whereβs that stupid maid? She needs to pack us a set of extra clothes, not to forget our toothbrushes and slippers!!β
My husband on the other hand, could be heard whacking away at Diva who was yelping loudly. Ashray, through his pain, could be heard imploring his elder brother, βBhai tell dad not to hit Divaβ. Later on, the bawarchi told us that Diva had squeezed herself into a tight ball and so the cricket bat had made contact with the corners of the kitchen cabinet, sparing her. She had cried out of fear, not pain, but my husband had been too blinded with anger to realise the futility of his actions.
The 15-year-old took charge
It was Armaan who put an end to the mayhem. βGet in to the car,β he hollered. So we jumped into our vehicle and sped away to the hospital. The doctor promptly whisked away Ashray, while the three of us spent anxious moments praying to God to show mercy on Ashray. Between my husband and me, we kept thinking of the worst that could happen. Armaan, who had shown maturity that belied his age–he was only 15 at that time–finally let loose! He gave us a piece of his mind; admonishing us for our hysterical behavior and we sheepishly realised that he was right.
An hour later, Ashray was back with us, his cheek heavily bandaged. It had required 15 stitches to sew up the gaping wound. There was an unspoken question hanging like a Damocles sword over our head. Our worst fears came true when the doctor said that the scar would remain for life, but our spirits were somewhat lifted when he said that we could opt for plastic surgery later on.
Diva is family
When we returned home, the first thing Ashray did was to call out to Diva but she didnβt come. Armaan called and so did I, but she was nowhere to be seen. I took a step forward to go to the kitchen but a sharp NO from my husband brought me to a halt. He was still livid with her and said βDiva will have to goβ but Ashray begged and pleaded and said Diva was family. We couldnβt disown her like this. He took it all onto himself, saying that he it was his fault; he had provoked her.
Finally, my husband gave in, whistled, and a second later we could hear Diva shuffling towards him. She lay prostrate on his feet as though begging for forgiveness. He gathered her in his arms and soon we were back to being one happy family.
Diva passed away four years later, breathing her last in my husbandβs arms. He dug her grave himself, carried her, laid her to rest and gently covered her with his coat. A part of us went with Diva, but she left behind lovely memories that we cherish till date. As for Ashray, he still has the scar. He says it reminds him of Diva. Moreover, he feels it gives him a macho look and is a great conversation starter, especially with the ladies!
We now have Devil with us, but to tell you who he bit and what happened thereafter, youβll have to read part two.
This is the first part of this article. To know who Devil bit, read the second part here.
Love , love, love your story telling. Even though I have heard it from you before but still reading it kept me engrossed till the very end. ππ
Yesss..I guess this story needed to be toldπ
What a fabulous piece of read! U got me emotionalπ
Awwwπππ
So well written!Could relate so well with this story! We had a similar experience with Caesar( a German Shepherd )who was in our lives when we were kids.
These fellas…they become a part of our livesπ
Superb Abha,your words make the story come alive. I can so identify with it. Looking forward to part 2.
Many thanks Ashi…I knew you’d connect….after all your furry ones are part of the family tooπ
Beautifully crafted story.
Many thanks
Heart-warming yet scary story!
I myself love dogs and I’ve had 3 dogs in my life. But none of them are present with us now anymore. And two of them were Spitz and one was a street dog.
So, I won’t know in detail what it takes to love and handle a German Shepherd!
However, I must say I’ve become a fan of Armaan who showed that level of maturity to handle the situation. Hats off, Armaan!
And, kudos to Ashray for forgiving Diva!
It’s true that dogs love their masters and their family members than anything else.
Thank you so much, Abha ma’am, for sharing such a wonderful story!
So glad you enjoyed this!
OMG Abha.. This gave goosebumps and tugged at my heart. Being a mother can visualize the scenario. So well written.Kudos.Kindled my love for the fur ones… They are family too.
Thanks Ruma!
What an emotional family-binding piece. Kudos Abha! Await more from your pen, nay, keyboard.
Knowing your love for these four legged ones, I knew you’d connect
Beautifully expressed. You can actually visualize the mayhem that ensued after the attack.
Hahahaha! Yesss
This incident will go straight to the heart of all dog lovers!Cheers to you abha for narrating it in such a picturesque way.
So glad you enjoyed reading thisπ
Beautiful expression of a mother, Memsaab and Diva’s “one master”. I could visualize you opening the door for your bearer, running with apprehension to check on the kids, and then running between your washroom and bedroom getting things in order. Hats off for scripting such an easy-to-imagine narration.
Looking forward to knowing whi Devil bit!
Comming from you, that’s a huge compliment. Many thanks
Jealousy does this to most dogs. They become disoriented. The one I have is very quite but cannot stand being teased. Beautiful read …..
Awwww…my love to sheroo
Relationship with dog and members of the family beautifully described. The story also ends with a suspense..can’t wait to read Devils own story..
So glad you liked it Shouvik!
Nice warm writing especially from the mid through to the end. Very vivid pictorial representation through words.
Many thanks Kaushik π
Abha you always are so good with words and stories and this being a real life story …so so engrossing , could picture the whole thing . Keep telling us stories … a talent which you have inherited from Jawahar ! (Your dad).
So glad you liked it suku!
Excuse me for referring to your dad by his first name .. but then the name itself has so much power .
Not at all….pa was a great story teller too and would write beautifully
This story is so much similar with mine though the wounds were minor.I think at times such incidents occur when one has a pet but the way you have portrayed your story is like witnessing it and also appreciate the concern for Diva after so many stitches by your son is the right parenting tooπ
Yes…all of us dog lovers have so many such incidents….but then they are family!
What an easy expressive engrossing read urging me to jump words and read at faster pace wanting to know more ! Bravo , both your boys ! Loved it π
Hahahaha! Many thanks sangeeta
Indeed, loved it. π
Must say that dogs are really the perfect example of loyalty!.
Great work ma’am π
Thanks a ton karandeep
Hey Abha that was a true to type account of a dog loving family -they become an intrinsic part of your lives with their human like behaviour and undying love!Loved it!!
Yesssss… they’re family
Sometimes pet becomes the core member of family and we share fun pranks even the mischiefs at time..but they r successful in evoking emotions more than humans.
well narrated incident… Equally raising curiosity for next part…
Reflect u as strong observant of any incident and equally well discription.
Thanks Nirmala!
Quite a frightening experience it would have been.
Nice to read the way you have described.. the panic, anger, all the different reactions of everyone, best of all our macho Aashray being so composed through it all.
And alls well that ends well!
Hahahaha..yess…all’s well that ends well
This is one fabulous story, kept gripped till the end. Would love to know whom Devil bit.π π
Hahahaha… devil’s story coming up next week!
Enjoyed reading the episode and felt so good to know that Ashray and Armaan are such good human beings- their love for Diva says it all!
Many thanks! Glad you loved it
Sometimes the most painful incidents become the sweetest memories π
PS : Wanna know more about Devil!
Yes, they become part of the family and leave behind terrific memories
Such a vivid piece of writing. The emotions that come and go with pets around is expressed so well, I’m sure all pet owners would’ve gone through similar experiences in different intensities and is absolutely relatable.
So glad you liked it
A remarkable demonstration of the canine- human bondage, vividly related through your real life experience. Have always been fascinated by the incredible traits of dogs and am reminded of legendaryβ βfaithfuls βlike Nipper and Hachikosan.
Waiting to know more about Devil!
Thanks Aditi, coming from you, it’s a huge compliment
I remember the incident very well since we were spending the night with you all at Good Hope T G . Thenext morning was golf at Western Dooars Club which I had organised being the secretary D G U. thosedays. We ultimately took Ashray to Goodricke group hospital at Aibheel on my sugestion as Dr Prasad was there who beautifully patched him up . Ashray was brave enough to take it and was enjoying the next day with all the attention he was getting at W D C.
Yesssss! You and meera were there right throughout. And arranged for the hospital visit too. What memories!
Wonderful narration maβam. I could picture the entire sequence of events and felt every emotion that Iβd have probably felt in the same situation (even though I donβt have a dog, I believe I understand the emotions people have with respect to a pet). The anger in the moment, the concern of the parents in the situation and, in the end, the sorrow at the loss were all vivid.
I look forward to the next part.
Many thanks Ashwin
Such an engrossing story! You have written it fabulously well…can’t help saying it yet again that there’s so much to learn from you Abha…Have you ever thought of publishing your work?
Many thanks Shefali. Just trying to get back to my first love..writing
What next with Devil? Heights of suspense…
That Diva prostrated before his master as if seeking forgiveness, moved me the most. Having been with many dogs at a time, that was so relatable…( humans,often do not ask forgiveness )
A brilliantly weaved real story.. the words jumped to life as if in a movie flashback mode .. π
Coming from you, that’s a huge compliment Priyakee. Many thanks
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Beautiful and touching…. The story kept me engrossed until the end. Waiting for part 2.
Thanks Latika
Excellent narration of an horrible incident and family’s love for Diva. Each person’s reaction was beautifully portrayed! Gripping till the end, though I had heard this incident from you, but was glued till the end. Incredible piece, very well written Abha indeed. Keep it rolling.
Thanks Raman! I guess the story needed to be documentedπ
I could feel all the emotions youβve so lucidly expressedβyour worry as a parent, Ashrayβs feeling when he was told he had to part with Diva and of course, Divaβs fear. Waiting for old man Devilβs story now π
Thanka Nirmika! Devil’s story comes up next week!π
This one again reiterate how wonderful you are as a story teller.Loved it and could feel all the different emotions put into. Looking forward for many more stories.π I didn’t find the scar on Ashray’s cheek. I will look into properly next time I meet himπ. He is a smart boy of a smart mom.
Absorbing story. Surprised that the father thought that the dog should go. My father would have been worried that the dog may have been poisoned after biting a man!
Proud of both the kids. Their heads and heart in the right place.
And if I may be allowed to make a small self propaganda, better to go to a plastic surgeon for the first repair itself, than later for correction of the scar which is much more a difficult job.π
Beautifully written and expressed… could relate so well with this .. emotions and sentiments penned so well brought to life the whole story..
How emotionally you have written, can imagine what you must gone through. You have weaved it so well that I am eagerly awaiting to read about Devil now
Very well written Abha, with the chaos, terror, fury all realistically described. Good to hear how the boys reacted, and that endears them to me. Ashwin, However is going to hear it from me when I see him!! Just kidding!
Waiting for the Devil story now!
So well described..as if everything was happening in front of my eyes ..Though I have heard this story from you… Ashwin..and Ashray as well but reading it the way you have expressed is SUPERB
Loved It to the Core. I have been a Dog lover my entire life and lost two majestic young Golden Retrievers. I know the joy as well as the pain of both, having a pet and losing one. This story shall remain etched in my heart always. Waiting for Part-2.
What a wonderful way of narrating the whole story….. each word of it brought out the vivid picture of everything…… the memsaheb, the love and belongingness for the pets and the fatherly pain for the son
Will wait Abha memsaheb for the devil